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Dodge Ball

The always amazing and unassuming flight from confrontation fright The rude avoidance of acquaintance with life’s challenges with dances How can these issues of man survive, and still claims the balls?

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Michael Jordan

Date: 9/5/2009 10:38:00 AM

Deborah - how can they indeed yet they forever do - Wonderful poem hon - God Bless, mj

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/5/2009 6:56:00 AM

this made me smile,a pleasure to read--charma

John Tanaskow

Date: 9/5/2009 5:55:00 AM

i do see what your saying. but the heart speaks more than just love. and you only gave use 14 lines. so i had to rap it up to quick. i could rewrite it in that manner but it lose something. thanks ether way if it doesn't qualify. i can try something else.

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 9/4/2009 2:43:00 PM

A verse of irish dialect?? I think I might be away to the challenge, love! Yea, sometimes we hit on a piece of verse that just sits well all the way around; tis the beauty of true events that make for grand poetry. I am glad that you enjoyed it so, and Oh,Yea, cool piece of verse, Deborah; just like you, always a treat!! :) poet butterfly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2009 1:49:00 PM

Interesting use of dodge ball as a subject. Sara

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/4/2009 12:35:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration...Raul

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/4/2009 12:29:00 PM

Dodge ball is a fun game... This poem shows the dodge ball experience.... Awesome poetry Deborah, different style i must try.....:JP]