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Do You See

I need you I love you I see you do you love? are you in love? can you see do you see me but what is there to see a hollow shell a love with no key in a room of a thousand keys to every door to every heart is mine there? no it is not do you see i have no key i have no heart the key you stole and when i had no key to give i ripped out my heart and gave you my soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 1:52:00 PM
wow justin very sweet profession of love, this was a good write and also i loved the last 6 lines. Jo
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Date: 2/24/2010 5:59:00 PM
sad love story! read Love? Bah! you'll feel better..we all go through it like chicken pox.
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Date: 2/24/2010 11:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Justin. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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