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Do You See??

Walking by a trickling brook I wonder why no one stops and looks For if they were to stop and see Such an awesome wonder would surely bring them to their knees A masterpeice so beautiful and vast Comprehension aludes me as to why people just walk past Listening to the trees as they creak and they sway Dancing in the light of the sun's golden rays No better picture could ever be painted; Nor song be orchestrated!

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Date: 1/16/2010 2:05:00 PM
Heather, I see that you have received God's gift... Your ability to see and love the beautiful things that he organized and made for our enjoyment. You life will be full of blessings when God is in the picture. (And thank you for commenting on my poem.) From one "Nature-loving poet" to another. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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