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Do You Listen

When you woke them up, at the crack of dawn Did you smile at them today? Did you pour a cup, with cream and love Then send them on their way? Did you drive with ease, Not honk and squeeze On the road to work today? Did you offer space, in your place in line at the crowded store today? Did you keep your grace, when the others raced To crowd in front of you? Quite often through our day We will say the worn out line "How are you, today?" While, they answer ..."I am fine." But do we really listen With a heart that opens wide? For a heart may need some tending, behind a lonely mask of pride Next time you ask this question Just watch before you start Their eyes may be revealing So listen with your heart _______________________________ 12/7/14 For Regina Riddle's Contest "Didactic"

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Date: 12/11/2014 6:43:00 PM
Carrie, when people ask "how are you" I often want to reply, "buy me a cup of coffee and I'll tell you." Very nice
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:17:00 PM
Wonderful way to advise, congrats on he win,
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Date: 12/8/2014 5:37:00 PM
Words of wisdom for sure. An area I definitely need to improve in. These are the kinds of poems I like! Congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Date: 12/8/2014 3:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win. My normal response to "How are you?' is "I can't complain," to which I could continue "When I do complain, they never listen, and if they listen there's nothing they can do about it anyway........" but I refrain as I don't want to be considered as the irascible old fart I am. Polite conventions, and often times that is enough.
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:24:00 PM
Congratulation Carrie on the win and thank you for this priceless lecture..huggs
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:23:00 PM
Wise are your words and wiser we will be if we follow your message! Heart Listener!! I like it.
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:04:00 AM
Oh Carrie!!! What a superb write. Going in my favs. This is sheer beauty! Oh...that I would do all that you have admonished me to do in this poem. If we all did...what a lovely world this would be to live in. Thank you for sharing this beauty. I was stumped for this contest...and didn't give it a go...I can see why you won the place you did. Can you hear my applause all the way from Lebanon? Hugs
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:24:00 AM
I REALLY LOVE THIS!!! Sorry for shouting :) Just wanted to be heard :) Thank you for entering the contest. I have the results posted in a blog, too, if you wanted to see it. THANK YOU!! God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:21:00 AM
Hi Carrie, wonderful advice to remember and so nicely written! Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:30:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie, for your top of the podium win.
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Date: 12/8/2014 7:50:00 AM
wonderful wise words - many congrats Carrie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2014 7:47:00 AM
As awesome as always Carrie! Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 12/8/2014 7:37:00 AM
Oh this is wonderful! A great message for the Christmas season and for anytime.
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Date: 12/8/2014 6:29:00 AM
Excellent as always. Congratulations on your first place win at the very top of the list.
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Date: 12/8/2014 3:18:00 AM
delicate realistic and heartmelting lines which is both thought provoking and somewhat pricks the heart.. :)! BIG CONGRATULATIONS CARRIE!
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Date: 12/8/2014 1:27:00 AM
Congrats on taking first.
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Date: 12/7/2014 10:43:00 PM
Great advice Carrie. Sometimes we just go through the emotions of life, not really living it.
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Date: 12/7/2014 10:02:00 PM
Sigh!!Your poem grabs my heart ,soul and mind..It stirs them together..So I can absorb the message in a deep way.How nice to be able to really listen and care for the other .So precious such words my dear,lovely as you my dear.
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