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I wandered about on a cold Christmas night Listening to carols sung in the distance Voices singing about the baby Jesus Could it be true that Jesus came to save me? Could it be true that Jesus came to save me? On this cold night it was so hard to believe My hands ached and my face felt the winds sting Their voices kept coming closer and closer Their voices kept coming closer and closer It felt like they were singing only to me There was a sudden urge to just run away I was so ashamed of my tattered old clothes I was so ashamed of my tattered old clothes Yet these angelic ones sang to my sad heart One man removed his coat and gave it to me At that moment what they sang felt like the truth! At that moment what they sang felt like the truth "Away in a manger no crib for a bed" "The little Lord Jesus lay down his sweet head." My heart then was flooded with heavenly light As I listened to the next song "Oh Holy Night"! For Edward Ebb's Chain verse contest Written December 27th 2015 Dedicated to those people who are in desperate need of warmth and hope.

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Date: 1/10/2016 8:36:00 PM
Very beautifully written Richard. Verlena
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thanks Verlena.
Date: 1/7/2016 9:05:00 PM
Yes, there seems to be many angels residing right here on earth just waiting to help someone in need... This is a beautiful poem, Rick. Very nicely penned!
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Date: 1/5/2016 12:12:00 AM
Richard, Nice win... ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/2/2016 8:03:00 AM
Congrats, my dear. So glad to see your name on this list. Hugs
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:42:00 PM
Me too! Thanks Eileen. Hugs back.
Date: 1/2/2016 1:08:00 AM
RICHARD, Congratulations on your "Chain Verse 1 WIN". SKAT
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:43:00 PM
Thanks SKAT.;0)
Date: 1/1/2016 9:52:00 PM
Thank you for participating Richard, nicely done and congrats on your second place!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/4/2016 12:19:00 AM
Much appreciated Ed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/3/2016 7:44:00 PM
Much appreciated Ed.
Date: 1/1/2016 5:13:00 AM
beautifully captured picture in words richard wishing you and your family pal a happy and joyous new year
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Liam. Much appreciated and the same to you and yours.
Date: 12/31/2015 8:25:00 PM
A job well done Richard
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks White Sage.
Date: 12/31/2015 7:51:00 PM
Great job you've done here Rick, a very moving poem too, Happy New Year Rick to you and all your family. Take care, Richard
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:03:00 AM
To you as well Richard, I hope you enjoyed the celebrations.
Date: 12/31/2015 1:36:00 PM
Beautiful prose! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Arthur!
Date: 12/30/2015 7:45:00 PM
wow, you captured exactly what he was wanting you to do with this chain poem idea. I just did it the other way, very differently, focusing on the four senses. I expect to see THIS one on the winner list. not sure about mine!
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Date: 12/31/2015 4:16:00 PM
I enjoyed yours as well Andrea.
Date: 12/29/2015 11:16:00 AM
What a touchy and mesmerizing poem my dear , I really liked it as much as I liked the title ut reminds me with (JLS) song do you hear what I hear....just in love with it...Merry Christmas and happy new year...hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/29/2015 12:39:00 PM
Yes the title is a play off that song. Thanks for your thoughtful visit and Happy new year to you as well.
Date: 12/29/2015 6:39:00 AM
A lovely and touching write, Richard. It is always important to think of those in need, especially during this festive season when such a lot goes to waste! // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2015 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Paul. :0)
Date: 12/29/2015 5:00:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Richard - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a wonderful and peaceful new year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2015 10:39:00 AM
You as well Anne Lise. Hugs Rick.
Date: 12/28/2015 5:53:00 PM
Nicely said ;) Hugs xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2015 4:30:00 AM
Thanks and hugs back to you Casarah.
Date: 12/28/2015 11:44:00 AM
Yes you are my son with the open loving heart Keep on writing with that amazing heart. Love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2015 4:32:00 AM
I sometimes wonder if I will run out of things to write about. At the moment things keep flowing into my mind. I love you too mom.
Date: 12/28/2015 11:41:00 AM
Hugs...that's all I can write, Richard. You have a heart of gold.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2015 4:32:00 AM
You are kind, thanks and a big hug back to you.

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