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Do You Feel the Same?

In a world so diverse Love is but a curse Ours is one to cherish Very likely to one day perish Even though it is very strong Youth these days dont last too long Over time lust will fade Uncovering feelings hidden in the shade So tell me now this is real Or tell me how you truely feel Tell me what u want to say Each and every single day Love me, for who i am Let me know you give a dam More and more i fall for you Every word i say is true Dont let me down, dont let me fall Over the ledge, into the wall You put me to the test Openly, i'll admit, you're the best Under pressure most will flee Forget that you're stuck with me Every day i'll hold you tight Even in the depths of night Longing to feel your touch Telling you i love you so so much Hoping that you feel the same Easy to lie, but such a shame So honest and true Admit that you love me too Maybe yes maybe no, but its not a game Everyday i love you, so tell me, do you feel the same? ? the first letter in each line= the last line?

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Date: 7/21/2010 11:58:00 PM
haha very good also well use as putting in it in the last line, acrostics are fun to do! great poem mike :D
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:20:00 PM
What an interesting combination of an acrostic and a couplet!!!(You know me I want those periods if you give me the capital at the beginning of the sentence LOL) Please give me your input on ...My best work to date (in my mind?;)....Is Part 1 When Madness Rides on Moonlight & Part 2 ...I'd sure like to know what you think?
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:04:00 PM
This is a beautiful Acrostic poem...Love it...Marty
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