Do They Know It's Christmas

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Do they know its christmas time at all scandinavia

Do They Know It's Christmas Shepherds from a nearby farm, heard star sing o'er Bethlehem, she sang hymns as cops disarm, three unwise rob an ATM. 2020 December 17 *3rd Place* Christmas Chastushka - Rules Revised ~~Andrea Dietrich Rhyme Scheme: abab

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2020 3:50:00 PM

cleverly penned William, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2020 4:43:00 PM

I truly appreciate your extended kindness, Jan, and may you and your loved ones enjoy your days ahead, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2020 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, William. Happy New Year. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2020 10:45:00 AM

Thank you, sweet Eve, as you are still in our prayers, Aloha!

John Watt

Date: 12/25/2020 5:12:00 PM

William, so clever of you to rhyme Bethlehem with ATM! Interesting hybrid of the birth of Jesus with modern times. Congrats on your win ~ John

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/25/2020 5:45:00 PM

Thank you, John, for your unrivaled insightfulness and felicitation, and may this joyful day perpetuate on days that follow, for you and your loved ones, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2020 5:35:00 PM

I liked the contrast between the three wise men of old and the "unwise" at the ATM. Congrats in my contest and Merry Christmas to you, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/24/2020 5:48:00 PM

Thank you, for the opportunity and season's best to you and your loved ones, Aloha!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/18/2020 2:47:00 AM

So sad... Wow. God B L E S S you

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/18/2020 2:53:00 AM

Thank you, Regina, when I was done, so was my brains, ugh, Aloha!