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Please, do not try to flatter me with those capricious words you speak, perspicuous but inurbane... their undercurrent, quite oblique. They may seem kind to you for sure; beneath, though sweet, alienate with mean, malignant metaphors that make the sugar dissipate. I will not be your sought scapegoat and gravitate to cunning words; with meanings so transitory... they're swished away like flocks of birds. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Ten Word Challenge Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged: 09/17/2016 Required Words to Use: alienate, capricious, dissipate, gravitate, flatter, inurbane, malignant, perspicuous, transitory, scapegoat

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Date: 9/18/2016 12:22:00 PM
Sandra, is this about one of the comments I left for you? Lol, you've written a biting piece that reads well and uses the words eloquently. Well done Sandra.
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Date: 9/18/2016 9:34:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, loved your words :) Richard
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Date: 9/18/2016 6:36:00 AM
So well said using the ten words Sandra...everyday we meet so many with malicious intentions and sweet words....alas "il nous faut tout pour faire un monde!" Congrats.
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Date: 9/18/2016 10:04:00 AM
:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thank you, Sunita, for your supportive comment and congrats! And for the quote in French, which I researched and think it means "it takes all sorts to make a world" ?? Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/18/2016 12:35:00 AM
Terrifique, Sandra, love the flow, too. Well done! Viv x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, Viv! Sandra
Date: 9/17/2016 3:31:00 PM
I like how you used the words...Congrats on your win Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph! Sandra
Date: 9/17/2016 3:10:00 PM
Great use of the 10 words Sandra, very poetic with a strong meaning. Congrats on a fine win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2016 8:10:00 AM
I enjoyed the challenge, John, and thanks for offering a chance to meet it. Also, thanks so much for my fine placement! Sandra
Date: 8/31/2016 5:50:00 PM
Wow! Nice one. I admit I was intimidated by the mandatory words. Good luck! Agnes
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Date: 8/30/2016 10:59:00 PM
I am almost afraid to praise this poem! LOL I loved it!!!!!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/31/2016 7:40:00 AM
Ha, Ha, Arthur! You can flatter me all you want! Thanks for the 'I loved it!' Sandra
Date: 8/30/2016 9:34:00 PM
Mrs Sandra, you certainly made this look easy! So eloquent! I'm sure Mr John will be as pleasantly impressed as I was.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/31/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. It was challenging! I appreciate your confidence that John will like it. Sandra

Book: Shattered Sighs