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Time is one of the best gifts we can offer to someone and also to ourselves.

It is one of the things in this life, we can never have control to. We can not stop. Just it will go, on and on. .. on and on. Hence, we all encouraged to make each time if possible, meaningful and fruitful may it be for someone else or for our ownself. Day to day we are facing situations where we need prioritize and allot some time to excel, do better in situations. Whatever we will do now will affect us, maybe not instant though but who knows when? so when, it will struck us, are we ready?

D O I T S L O W E R Have you ever stopped and watched how kids laugh on a carousel? Or for few minutes you listen to the pounds and thumps of rain? Have you ever followed a butterfly fluttering by? Or stare at the sun painting red and orange bright? Daily you put the alarm-- so conscious of time. You want everything to be done on second hand; you run as if each day on the fly. When someone asked you: "How are you?" Did you ever care to reply, asking back the same? Your wife and kids ask you for a time yet, most of the time all you said is wait for awhile. The night skirts it's dark starry skies, instead of going home, you chose to work for more. When you are done and it's time to sleep, still... there are hundred chores running round your head. One Sunday morning, your child wanted a talk-- but your phone rang, you wave a hand and say tomorrow. You are so haste to leave, you didn't see his brow break to sorrow... You lost the touch even a good friendship die right before your eyes 'Cause you never had time to call and say "Hi"! When will you realize quality time is a must? Don't you know when you dance fast on life's music you are missing much? Time is short and so is life All music comes to an end, it doesn't last When you see life like a race you will miss half of the fun in each phase. Worrying and hurrying through the day is like disclosing some gifts along each way. Life is never a race, do take it slower... © O.E. Guillermo' 10:44 pm, November 18, 2014 Sponsor Kelly Deschler Contest Name I Love Rock N' Roll Placed 4th Song: TIME by PINK FLOYD

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Date: 6/29/2015 6:23:00 PM
You chose a very important topic and you wrote a very good poem. I only have a little suggestion about these lines. You have to use the past tense. One Sunday morning, your child wanted a talk-- but your phone rang, you wave a hand and say tomorrow. //Thank you//Blackmatta
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Date: 3/11/2015 4:54:00 AM
Much truth and a lovely write, Olive. Julia, xx
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Date: 3/11/2015 6:42:00 AM
thanks much Julia.. :)!
Date: 12/20/2014 2:56:00 PM
Excellent and wise thoughts penned, Olive! Great song choice, too...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/21/2014 7:25:00 AM
thanks much Rhonda.. :)!
Date: 12/11/2014 2:15:00 PM
Wonderful poem Olive. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/11/2014 9:32:00 PM
thanks Brenda.. :)!
Date: 12/10/2014 8:30:00 AM
Amazing write Olive, Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/11/2014 9:31:00 PM
thanks much Maurice.. :)!
Date: 12/9/2014 8:55:00 PM
Awesome write on life, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/10/2014 6:04:00 AM
thanks much Dr. Ram :)
Date: 12/9/2014 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations Olive_eloi!!!:)) Cake and tea for a treat:)) // paul
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Date: 12/10/2014 6:04:00 AM
Paul no cakes.. olive_eloi getting big huhuhu
Date: 12/8/2014 10:42:00 PM
In this day and age of speed and technology, there is so much that we miss, and those are the most important things in life.... I love the positive message you send here. Congrats on your win, Olive Eloisa!
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Date: 12/10/2014 6:03:00 AM
thanks much Kelly.. :)
Date: 11/22/2014 2:36:00 AM
Thanks for the reminder, also for the fluid lines. I never fail to wonder, how you could write so fine. Rated! Kim Patrice :)
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Date: 11/23/2014 2:02:00 AM
thanks for stopping by and commenting.. :)!
Date: 11/19/2014 7:03:00 PM
beautifully painted olive life is worth living to max smiling
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Date: 11/20/2014 8:26:00 AM
thanks much. :)
Date: 11/19/2014 1:40:00 PM
Life has become too fast; time is money; priorities go back to front; we look at the big picture, but do not notice the details. There will arrive a day when we'll shed tears for what has been lost or wasted...but then it would be too late. // paul
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Date: 11/20/2014 8:25:00 AM
indeed this the sum of it.. :)!thanks :)
Date: 11/19/2014 7:12:00 AM
lovely layout and great instances of truth telling
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Date: 11/20/2014 8:25:00 AM
thanks mjuch MArtin.. :)!
Date: 11/19/2014 6:18:00 AM
we have forgotten how to get little pleasures from little things. Subjects of pleasure are littered everywhere we have no time to see. Actually we are running after a mirage- the so called pleasure. we are settling for less. Well done Olive. Love Hugs!XXXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/20/2014 8:24:00 AM
thanks much.. :)! always.. :)
Date: 11/18/2014 1:08:00 PM
Your so right Olive. Life is fast paced these days, especially in the bigger cities. A slower pace sure suits me. Great track 'Time' by 'Pink Floyd' one of my favourite bands, James :) ;-)
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Date: 11/19/2014 1:40:00 PM
I'd say quite a few here on the Soup have experienced your words at some point in their lives, James :) :)
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Date: 11/19/2014 5:01:00 AM
I had experienced some of the situations i mentioned above personally though.. thanks for dropping by.. :D
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Date: 11/19/2014 4:57:00 AM
I was actually searching for a song which falls to the genre: rock and roll.. :) of course there are a lot of choices however, I want to write a poem from a song that is meaningful on lyrics and at same time will be able to touch me and something I connect with.. :)!this one of my choices.. :)!
Date: 11/18/2014 9:42:00 AM
savor the moment, i must agree... this wonderful read defines the true worth of life, eloi... tara na, kita kits!.. huggs
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Date: 11/19/2014 4:53:00 AM
hahaha saan NEtte? miss ko na din ikaw.. :D! thanks much Nette.. :D wil soupmail you.. :D

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