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Do I Think To Feel, Or Feel To Think?

Too shy to speak; to say all that I feel, my mind subjected to thinking things through, and 'what if' factors mock and cloud my view, no longer knowing what is fake or real, emotions sprawl and mentally congeal, until I hide inside my shell and rue the things I never said and didn't do, because my thinking made them all surreal. I think I need to stop this thinking soon and say the things I feel, then hope and pray, that you will understand, I'm not a goon, but want to love you in every way, beneath the sun and under silver moon, as heart begins to rule the head today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/18/2009 11:09:00 AM
Jem - congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:42:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:46:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jem. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2009 6:36:00 PM
Interesting reflection and nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 8/25/2009 11:22:00 AM
Like the last three lines. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/25/2009 10:56:00 AM
Wonderful ! Full of passion. james
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