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Do Hold On

Days pass by so fast It tells me something will last I'm feeling firm and mushy Fleeing myself from fantasy Seeing myself in reality As it must be Slightest sound creates a bang So thus silence a quiet cry A vow of total commitment Should love be intermittent? Others fight strong and hard Few staggers and bards Surrendering on fines and woes As sometimes things get lose Hold on, do hold on Never ever let it go Stay through, stay true No one will, except you By: Olive_eloi 12:01 am O2/09/2014

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Date: 11/24/2014 1:07:00 PM
Indeed the days pass by so fast, that one needs to hold on, James :)
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Date: 2/11/2014 3:51:00 PM
:-)
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