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To take thee as my wife my dear, I do And kiss thy lips as lovers often do With love and trust I'll promise not to do... Forswear thou vows or swear damage to do Of dreams that thy desire for me to do, I'll do, unquestioned what thou breath saith do Thus compliment and care for thee I'll do, Until thine life answers what death shall do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/22/2011 9:20:00 PM
Don't know how this one escaped my eye. A fascinating way to write a rhyme, it reads beautifully with a great story.
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Date: 9/19/2011 8:27:00 PM
very nice poem for the contest. good luck
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Date: 9/17/2011 12:17:00 AM
Congrats Johnny on your outstanding win luv..
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Date: 9/15/2011 11:28:00 PM
Great promise and win. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:46:00 PM
Well done, congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your amazing win with this lovely poem!!!!-------Lori
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Date: 9/13/2011 2:59:00 PM
Congrats Johnny on your big win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:22:00 AM
CONGRATS JOHNNY ON BIG WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV...
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Johnny. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/13/2011 4:00:00 AM
hey Johnny congrats on your win, like this one..David
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Date: 9/8/2011 2:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Johnny. Love, Carol
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