Dizzy

I've been waiting, anticipating, contemplating how it would be to be reeling with the feeling of your passion crashing down on me. Make me dizzy with your kisses, dizzy with your love. Don't be lazy. Drive me crazy, crazy with your love, crazy with your love. We'll feel the heat when we meet. Hot blood rushing in, swelling lips, moving hips, make me dizzy with your love. Hold me close. Lay me down. Make me dizzy with your love, dizzy with your love, dizzy with your love. Kiss me here. Kiss me there. Make me dizzy with your love. Put your hand in my hair. Make me dizzy with your love. Drinking wine, Feeling fine, so dizzy with your love. Holding tight, letting go, so dizzy with your love, dizzy with your love, dizzy with your love. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: July 21, 2016 "All Rights Reserved"

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2016 5:40:00 PM

Great catchy lyrics Carol I hope you can get it set to music it would be fun to hear the finished article:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet
Date: 10/23/2016 6:25:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, but I broke my keyboard! :(

Keith Logan

Date: 10/22/2016 7:56:00 AM

May not be among the best poems ever written but as lyrics go, my opinion is excellent.

Carole Duet
Date: 10/22/2016 8:35:00 AM

Thanks, Keith. I agree...it's now really what I consider a poem either. It's a rock/pop song! (In my head anyway) lol