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'divorce Society'

~Haiku~ your love flew away like a migrating bird and never came back... ~Limerick~ Your lack of love pushed me to the floor I couldn’t take it anymore I signed on the dotted line You were no longer mine Why don’t you just hit the door? ~Couplet~ We entered into a partnership Six months down the line you decided to jump ship 7th place Contest: Divorse Club Sponsor: PD © November 2010

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2010 3:04:00 PM

Nicely done my sweet dear poet friend... a winner from the moment it left your mind...congrats my partner in crime...love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 12:53:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Wilma

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 9:12:00 AM

Ow, it sounded so sweet, shows divorce so quick really hurts, enjoyed it, congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 7:09:00 AM

Good Morning, Wilma) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 6:34:00 AM

Congrats dear Wilma my friend on your big win in P.D.'s great contest with this brilliant write and entry luv.. enjoy another top ten win today with lots of luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/29/2010 1:27:00 AM

beautiful set ups, Wilma, i love these poems because they are well written.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/28/2010 9:34:00 PM

Ouch, it started out so serene but unloads as you read, excellent work:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2010 1:05:00 AM

Cool poems. That was funny, partnership changing for "jump ship!" Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 11/27/2010 6:28:00 AM

BUMMER, Wilma! "Why don't you just hit the door." I love that line. Shows good self-respect. Love, Dave

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/26/2010 7:34:00 PM

Love these three that make up your entry for the contest, Wilma.. Great job...I enjoyed the humor in all three forms.. Love, Audrey

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/26/2010 6:02:00 PM

nice piece my friend

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/26/2010 10:47:00 AM

Excellent, Wilma! Witty and to the point. Marriages here often last only a few months before someone "jumps ship." And if he pushed you to the floor, shove him out the door! Best wishes in the contest with this great series. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/26/2010 10:43:00 AM

Hello Wilma, Very well done, all three Thank you for stopping by to see me. Your kind words mean a lot. Seems we may have something in common. Have a beautiful weekend. As Always, Shar

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/26/2010 6:32:00 AM

You just keep getting better and better..love it. BG

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 11/26/2010 5:22:00 AM

Good morning, Wilma your haiku flew away with my thoughts. I agree with Michael, a sure winner'(LIN~RA)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/26/2010 4:06:00 AM

Have tosay my fav. is the Haiku and the rest just fall into place... a winner my Partner in crime who Im still thinking of dressed as a nurse lol enjoyed this entry my dear...with love Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/26/2010 12:18:00 AM

reminds me of the phrase "his loss, your gain," wilma... an array of beautiful well sewn together.. best of luck in the contest.. i just did my piece too minutes ago! warmest, nenette