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Divorce Memories

Morning bed Sheets tightly tucked One pillow crumpled There once was a gal named Linda Oh the marriages she did get inta Try as they would to be as they should They never could even begin ta. Wanting a home intensely evolved into creations of delusion Life broke through, one let go, in freedom lay the solution For the Divorce Club Contest

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 12/8/2010 4:11:00 PM

nice write here my friend

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/5/2010 11:37:00 PM

enjoyed these Linda, congrats on your win. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/3/2010 9:11:00 PM

I really liked your couplet for this one, Linda--very thought -provoking and I enjoyed your limerick & haiku too :) Congrats on you win! -- nikko :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2010 3:11:00 PM

Congrata Linda on your success in contest...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, linda

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 9:24:00 AM

Good work on these set, enjoyed the humor and the lovely visual haiku, congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 7:18:00 AM

Linda) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 6:43:00 AM

Congrats Linda on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this brilliant write and entry on divorce my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations Linda for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

Date: 11/30/2010 9:44:00 AM

Enjoyed your creative write for the divorce club contest,good luck and thanks for your comment.Sandra

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/29/2010 10:37:00 PM

enjoyed your write today, and many thanks for your comment Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2010 8:38:00 PM

Hey, you kind of went along same lines as I did with your haiku, Linda. I REALLY like all three of your entires here. Cool. Luv, Andrea

Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/28/2010 4:48:00 PM

Interesting modification of that troubled girl limerick. I can't for the life of me however remember it. I do know a winner though and I know that this one is it. No contest. One of the best. You'll rank high in this contest. *TheKidsterWasHere*

Linda Milgate

Date: 11/28/2010 9:43:00 AM

Wanted to acknowledge the limerick is a modification from an old limerick about a girl who always got inta trouble heard long ago as a child.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/27/2010 2:32:00 PM

I particularly enjoyed the first two with full of wit and yet frolicsome write, linda. Good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/27/2010 11:25:00 AM

Interesting write..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..I appreciate you stopping by and reading my work you seemed to feel the spirit in which I wrote the Haiku about the tree..Divorce is not a good thing but sometimes it happens...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/27/2010 9:09:00 AM

This is really cool, Linda!! An excellent, witty entry for the contest and I wish you success. (Really love the way you did the limerick rhyme!) Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 11/27/2010 8:53:00 AM

in freedom lay the solution... yep, that did it for me too.. best of luck in the contest~~

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/27/2010 8:11:00 AM

i like this entry. the limerick. i felt you and wanted to comfort you. John H Loving III

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/27/2010 8:09:00 AM

Well written piece for contest my friend, best of luck