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Divine Wine

Divine wine… Pleasantness is within me, I need more of that wine. What a night I hope it be, I need more of that wine. You are me and I'm you, till my last day loving you. I am us and you are we, I need more of that wine. Like a candle in my night, break the darkness from my sight, Shine at me until I see, I need more of that wine. I’ll rub my lips to your lips; my pain will be all gone, Let’s break our cage, and go free; I need more of that wine. Blissfulness is around us; seek it from within you, Come and find the hidden key, I need more of that wine. Wingless flying is unwise, sit down, watch the sunrise. Laughing crying grief and glee, I need more of that wine. You left a trail for "Haloo", he found you with no clue. He knows the way and told me, I need more of that wine. 10/22/2019 Haloo Note: Note: This poem is in the form of "Ghazal" with 13 syllables. The rhyming in Ghazal ends with AA bA cA dA eA etc. It comes in two different forms with and without refrain. The refrain in this poem is, “ I need more of that wine”. (Poetrysoup has a great explanation for this form of poetry).

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Curie Stark

Date: 7/14/2021 3:18:00 AM

This wine tastes so fine.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/30/2021 7:21:00 PM

Thanks my friend...Sorry, it took such a long time for me to respond.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/4/2019 3:37:00 AM

I need, I need the wine, I need the you in greatest holy wine///

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/26/2019 12:43:00 AM

Thank you my dear moonlight.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2019 3:21:00 PM

If she is the wine I can appreciate your desire to be intoxicated. The great part of lovemaking is that there is no hangover.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/26/2019 12:42:00 AM

Thank you Richard

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/24/2019 11:51:00 PM

So well written poetry my friend and seems so difficult too!;) well done!;)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/26/2019 12:40:00 AM

Thank you dear...

Maria Williams

Date: 11/19/2019 4:32:00 AM

Gosh a complicated form my friend. A lovely poem, so many beautiful lines in it. Thanks for sharing Haloo....Maria Hugs

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/19/2019 11:27:00 AM

Thank you, my dear friend... You never know one day I might call you from Australia.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2019 3:14:00 PM

back here to fave this one!! I was reading it again and realized I simply adore it.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/18/2019 6:24:00 PM

You are so wonderful my dear Andrea...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/8/2019 6:07:00 PM

Hi Pashang, As, always, your poetry is excellent, it sings in the mind, painting wondrous images, whether joyful or sad. It is always my pleasure and honour to read your poetry. Wonderful piece. I am more of a Coke drinker myself, the wine always makes me ill. Enjoy the tipple. Have a wonderful Saturday, when it comes. Your friend always....Mike.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Mike.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/8/2019 9:10:00 AM

A wonderful and well composed poem. Thanks for sharing it

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/8/2019 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Ravi...

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/6/2019 2:30:00 PM

Well composed and flows nicely. Cheers.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/7/2019 7:32:00 PM

Thanks, Juliet, “Good Night, Good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that I shall say good night till it be morrow.”

Jean Murray

Date: 11/4/2019 4:57:00 PM

Hi!..After all that wine, I fear she best not move.....never mind fly!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/7/2019 7:30:00 PM

Haha... Jean, you're great.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/25/2019 2:34:00 AM

Amazing poetry, Pashang.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:42:00 AM

Thank you, Harry.

Charles Messina

Date: 10/24/2019 9:37:00 PM

Divine! A toast to you Pashang. Great write! ~Charlie

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:42:00 AM

Cheers, thank you.

Joseph May

Date: 10/24/2019 2:59:00 PM

"The hidden key" is in the vine...Nicely penned Pashang

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:41:00 AM

Indeed, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2019 2:03:00 PM

- A wonderful poem ... enjoy your wine with pleasure, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:41:00 AM

Cheers my dear.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 10/23/2019 8:14:00 PM

A delightful write, Pashang! This is the first time I have read a poem in the Ghazal form and I like it! Many thanks for your kind comment re the Halloween Hoopla write. The very best to you, my friend, as you continue your poetical journey - Bob

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:40:00 AM

You are too kind.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2019 5:21:00 PM

I'm drunk on your words my friend, I can pass on the wine though as I prefer a cuppa, no wingless flying for you my friend you are the eternal butterfly spreading your wings and thoughts through your lovely poems:-)hugs Jan xx

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:39:00 AM

Then Cheers... Love to hear from you...

Silent One

Date: 10/23/2019 2:34:00 PM

Very well written..

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:39:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/23/2019 9:48:00 AM

I think it is all about that "hidden key" for souls to find and embrace divine beauty.. love and bliss.. Unique poetry, Pashang! So amazing and inspiring! I immensely enjoyed the read.. A great pleasure to read your poetry.. thank you for sharing.. Best regards and blessings.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:38:00 AM

Indeed... Thank you, my dear friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 6:12:00 PM

I remember how good you are at this form. I love the repeated line. It's so fun!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:38:00 AM

Thank you, Ms. Glazalier.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/22/2019 12:28:00 PM

Romantic, in a style of your own, Pashang! Hope that the wine you long for will never turn sour:) Regards // paul

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:37:00 AM

Thank you, Paul.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/22/2019 12:23:00 PM

This is my kind of poem lol. Beautifully written :-) x

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:37:00 AM

Thank you, Elaine.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/22/2019 11:12:00 AM

Divine is the wine and beautiful is your poem..excellent write, Pashang.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:35:00 AM

You are too kind Vijay...

Judy Ball

Date: 10/22/2019 8:55:00 AM

Oh Me Too! I Need MORE Of That Wine. Loved this. An extremely enjoyable read for me. It made me smile. Thank you for sharing and for your visit to my page. God Bless, JB

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:35:00 AM

Thank you, Judy.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/22/2019 8:05:00 AM

I'll have some of that wine! Pashang lol...very fruitful write my friend...good until the last drop...^WW^ :o)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/25/2019 2:33:00 AM

Anytime my dear friend...