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Disturbed Moment

DISTURBED MOMENT In this sudden moment I’ve a simple wish to walk about spreading love everywhere Oh, the thought seems so...bright, so…sunny Yet – and I cast this flash aside – A thought in isolation is thought without foundation I’m taking the best minutes of a long day, Have gathered round imagination a peaceful sort of garden…or…or forest in my idyll And I a sturdy tree standing high, quite singular, With the emerald leaf-people spread all about me, They and my eyes dancing to a single, sweet violin My white cat sitting at the kitchen window, oblivious, adds shapeless, benign geometry to the mix And the footloose vision might progress, But the intense quiet rushes, breezily, inside my head – (those invisible specs of original creation, whirling impishly, become noisy) Now a car horn And my ecstatic inner vision gone to reality Why can’t the jealous world leave us lovers alone? Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/28/2015 1:44:00 PM
Hold on..' jest let me get my extra large dustpan and broom, shovel also a 'force field' set up, there Daver..' Now you can get into creative again..'
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Date: 6/10/2015 6:00:00 AM
So very original, and amazing.:), I will send it to myself, then to Ellen...she will love this! A favourite for me...thank YOU! I have a link I'll be sending to you...Keep well, love, Mikki
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:39:00 AM
A good write, its very expressive I like that, Thanks for your kind comments on my poem fathers day 2015 My mother left the family home when I was about 13years old very traumatic but I lived with my dad, and he used to write poetry so he kind of passed it down, inspired by his words of faith during his pain and suffering he died 23hours after I gave birth to my third son, it was horrendous but he was strong So I stand strong in faith too. He joked all the time regardless of his ailments.
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Date: 6/5/2015 7:24:00 PM
thanks for sharing with me about that Bite Me expression. It's the topic of a contest going on at Soup. I am surprised if you have not seen other Bite Me poems here lately!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/6/2015 10:15:00 AM
Glad to hear something from the old days has survived. The sponsor of that soup contest must be an old timer like me. Love, daver
Date: 6/5/2015 8:02:00 AM
so stirring through your poetic eyes.. i love this, dave!.. huggs
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Date: 6/4/2015 11:54:00 PM
Yes, I really like this one that I saw earlier today at PFT. I am glad to know someone like you who never stops writing poetry. Keep up the golden quill, Daver. and thanks for always making time to see my work.
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Date: 6/4/2015 7:15:00 PM
I like to be inside that head of yours, lol, Lovely sentiments you beautifully described. Hugs
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Date: 6/4/2015 2:56:00 PM
Amazing is this disturbed moment, Dave love the imagery,,,,
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