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Distant Together

That distant bend where we first met eyes played games and changed to stars hearts rocked hard to be let out of the cages skin ignited sparks that could consume a forest warmth that could melt primitive glaciers visions of love, flowers and paradise seemed distant but we shot straight to achieve and live in them Night after night, year after year you sleep beside me sunken deep into the pillow still I can’t reach out my palm to touch your hair the rough tumble of life the personality quirks, familiarity, habits and the need for individual space colluded to deepen the chasm that came from nowhere sorcerer time did cast a spell on our love doused our once incandescent flame withered the bleeding red rose Wish we could once again be distant strangers and set fire ablaze with glances fanned by electric touches! But guess we are destined to live and grow distant together. Written on 06/11/2016

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Date: 6/13/2016 8:02:00 AM
A very powerful poem, Sara. Congratulations for your nice placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/13/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sandra!Hugs to you.
Date: 6/13/2016 3:21:00 AM
A terrific write, Sara, enjoyed every line of it. The poem is deep - unfortunately it does ring true. Congrats on your well desrved win. ~karam~
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/13/2016 8:31:00 AM
Yes tha'ts life Karam!Thanks a lot!
Date: 6/12/2016 5:35:00 PM
wow, this is great poetry Sara. I see the poets did mainly one theme or another (burned out passion or the loss of youth) I really enjoyed seeing yours because most of them were like mine, on lost youth. congrats for your win.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/12/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Andrea,congrats to you too!
Date: 6/12/2016 5:05:00 PM
Wow, Sara, the contrast between passion's lust and power and the fading flame of love love's cooling. Powerfully written take on the contest theme. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/12/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thanks for picking my poem John :)
Date: 6/12/2016 11:47:00 AM
Great well written xxxx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/12/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Wendy:)
Date: 6/11/2016 5:12:00 PM
The distance between two hearts growing greater...Very good write Sars
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/12/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Joseph!

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