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Distant Thoughts

Distant Thoughts ______________________ Woes of this "Princess", I choose not to be oh for this life that weigh like bricks on me. That is why I ran away, sitting here in natures hold I like the peace and futures here untold. I can be whom I choose, not whats chose for me and out in this private place I'm alive and free. I don't care about these cloths, They show not what's inside and every secret I have to the trees I can confide. But as life would have it, yes...I have been found now I stay in "Distant Thoughts" and I hear no other sound. 5/26/14

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Date: 6/9/2014 4:16:00 PM
Jessica, thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda
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Date: 6/8/2014 8:20:00 PM
JESSICA, Congrats on, Isaiah's "Distant Thought" contest. AWESOME WIN.......LUV* LINDA
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Date: 6/9/2014 1:52:00 PM
Thank You Linda, I am very proud of the win. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Take care my friend, Jess
Date: 6/3/2014 7:26:00 AM
Congrats. my friend, excellent write, take care......Vera...........
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Date: 6/3/2014 2:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Vera :) I am glad you liked it. Take care my friend, Jess
Date: 6/1/2014 1:15:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem...congrats to you..She did look peaceful didn't she? BG
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Date: 6/1/2014 7:51:00 PM
Thank you B.G, I am really glad you liked the piece :) Take care my friend, Jess
Date: 6/1/2014 2:15:00 AM
Congrats on the win for distant thoughts, jessica
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Date: 6/1/2014 1:11:00 PM
Thank You Dr. Ram, I appreciate the kind comment. Take care my friend, Jess
Date: 5/31/2014 11:12:00 PM
A great write and a fine win my friend, Congrats!!!!!!
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Date: 6/1/2014 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Robert, I thought I would do a little better with this poem, however I am glad I got 7th at least. Still really happy :) Take care my friend Jess
Date: 5/27/2014 7:20:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed . Tfs
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:08:00 AM
Thank You Ravi, thank you for your wonderful comment about the piece. Take Care Friend :) Jess
Date: 5/27/2014 2:03:00 AM
This is a very well written piece, it flows nicely along and conveys a wonderful message, blessings Carl
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Carl, appreciate your kind comments always :) Take care Friend, Jess
Date: 5/26/2014 10:53:00 PM
A truly great write and entry!! Bravo!!
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Robert, you are always very kind about my work. Glad you enjoyed my friend. Take care, Jess
Date: 5/26/2014 9:21:00 PM
this is a great take on that picture of the girl by a tree. It is cool to see someone do that theme already.
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:43:00 PM
Thank You Andrea, I was deff trying to capture the beauty within the painting. I am really glad you thought I did well. I really take your and everyone elses comment to heart. Thank you so very much. Take care Friend, Jess :)
Date: 5/26/2014 7:36:00 PM
This is wonderful Jess. Sitting alone with her thoughts... Goes perfectly with the picture...Hugs Tim
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:41:00 PM
Thank You Tim, always lovely hearing your comments on my pieces. Glad you liked it. Have a wonderful evening . Take care Friend Jess :)
Date: 5/26/2014 6:13:00 PM
i like that, every secret I have to the trees I confide.. very well said. I can see your words along with the painting so perfectly. good luck in the contest, well done on the poem :)
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Date: 5/26/2014 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Casarah, Your kind comment is most appreciated. I really hope I have a good chance in the contest, thank you for best wishes. Pleasure to meet you. Take care Friend, Jess :)

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