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Distant Star

A million light years away In a futuristic galaxy Far beyond our sky Dwell the knights of the Jedi Obi Wan Kenobi is a great Jedi Knight He battles the forces of evil To do what's just and right As he wields his weapon of light Looking like a knight medieval Darth Vader causes great upheaval He belongs to the evil empire To destroy the galaxy is his desire Vader is building a death star A weapon of mass destruction He must be stopped before he gets too far Or there will be a massive explosion Then Obi Wan confronts the medieval knight In a battle with sabres of light And the rebel forces attack with might For justice they do fight Joseph May Theme: The Jedi Strike Back

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/10/2013 10:11:00 AM

Awesome write and win Joseph! Hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/8/2013 2:37:00 PM

nicely penned poem, congrats on your win :)

Mark Taylor

Date: 9/6/2013 11:26:00 AM

Congrats on your win

Skat A

Date: 9/6/2013 9:22:00 AM

yeah, Star Wars Rules:) I agree, I just got stuck with the Star trek contest" Sadly I'm not the oldest one, or else I'd probably would have hosted this one instead. Anyways, I had fun with the Star trek theme LOL, I kid you not. Love ~SKAT~

Joseph May
Date: 9/6/2013 8:14:00 PM

Both contest were fun Skat....I had fun with it too....hugs

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/5/2013 9:34:00 PM

that's two number 1spot, Congrats on your win. Morgan

Joseph May
Date: 9/6/2013 7:05:00 AM

thanks Morgan....I am surprised I was first in both Star contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 6:01:00 PM

Hello Joseph, stopping by with smiles:-) ;-) CONGRATULATIONS :) on your STAR WARS win.. enjoy my blog when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15877&PoetID=18720 always & forever *The Lovely Poet Destroyer

Joseph May
Date: 9/6/2013 7:04:00 AM

thank you for my first place win in your contest Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 8/17/2013 3:14:00 PM

Ohhhhh good one Joseph....and I'm not even a real fan....

Donna Jones
Date: 8/17/2013 3:15:00 PM

Even though I have Spock ears haha

Joseph May

Date: 8/17/2013 9:20:00 AM

Star Wars Rules

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2013 8:02:00 AM

Captivating story told in poetic form..Enjoyed reading it today..If for a contest, it should be in the winners' circle..If there was a lady named Ella and she married someone with the last name of Vader what would her married name be?..Sara

Joseph May
Date: 8/17/2013 9:19:00 AM

thank you Sara....Ellavader...hope she's going up...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/17/2013 6:54:00 AM

Brings back childhood memories. I remember when star wars came out. My gavorite is still return of the Jedi.

Joseph May
Date: 8/17/2013 9:18:00 AM

thank you Richard..