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Distant Shore

Distant shore I float this night on gentle seas of star dust truth and ocean breeze As rhythmic waves like lullabies send whispers soft neath moonlit skies Reflections shine of shimmered view in swirling shapes on waters blue Horizons smile deep amethyst illumined by an endless bliss I feel at peace such beauty seen as if I’ve stepped into a dream Yet my heart sits a distant shore for on this night I love you more Good Night Soupers Have a great weekend See you again on Monday

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/28/2017 12:48:00 AM

Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, passionate, heart touching good night love poem:) Wow!So captivating! Just beautiful!:)I truly enjoyed reading this one again from you Chris. A 7 + + ! A fav.And thanks so much for sharing!:) The best to you!For sure I'll be back and continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry, my friend Chris:))Spill ink!Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D

Chris Green
Date: 6/28/2017 8:53:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend for your always kind comments on my poetry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2017 4:23:00 AM

You have mastered rhyme in a most sublime way Chris. Superb! 7 ; )

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:23:00 AM

Thanks so very much Connie. I am grateful for your kindness.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/15/2017 2:25:00 PM

Chris, your poetry always inspires me, the rhythm of your rhyme and the fluid imagery.....Wonderful!

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:23:00 AM

Thank you so very much Paulette, I am thrilled my work inspires you. I appreciate your kind words.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/14/2017 9:51:00 PM

Love the flow, Chris,, wonderful write. Hugs

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thanks so very much Eve.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/14/2017 5:44:00 PM

Have a great weekend, Chris. I love this poem!

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thanks so very much Dane Ann

Darren White

Date: 1/14/2017 2:25:00 AM

Have a great weekend Chris, enjoy yourself, see you on Monday :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:21:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren.

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 1/13/2017 10:38:00 PM

An amazing night to you, Chris - thank you for such a beautiful read :) I love the picture you painted with your poetry :*

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:21:00 AM

Thanks so very much Claudia, I am thrilled you liked this one.

Holly Bohto

Date: 1/13/2017 9:49:00 PM

Lovely. JUST LOVELY. And I hate that word. But somehow that was the only word to describe this write. :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Holly for your LOVELY comment on my poem. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2017 7:07:00 PM

You are sure good with GORGEOUS Good nights!!! I guess you must take off and play on the weekends? Have fun, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:20:00 AM

That's right, my weekends are filled with fun and inspiration. :) Thank you so much Andrea.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/13/2017 7:01:00 PM

Ah! Chris, you are in love.Yes your poetry has lots of emotions, I felt them while reading this love poem. I alspo hope she gets to read this beautiful poetry.

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:19:00 AM

Thank you Darlene for your kind comments. She did and yes, you are right. :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/13/2017 6:05:00 PM

Yet here my heart sits /a distant shore/for on this night I love you more-So much emotion.I hope She gets to read this beauty..Its Awesome.

Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 8:19:00 AM

Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I am so happy you liked this one. I'm sure she did.