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Distant Omens

Distant Omens Augeries of forgotten doubts long erased by hourglass sands shadows passing through an empty space voided by loveless passion hiding in search of an omen. John G. Lawless Give Me A Sign – Poetry Contest 5/14/2015

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Date: 6/6/2015 11:21:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 6/6/2015 10:52:00 PM
An excellent verse, John! So deserving of your 1st place win! Congrats! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/6/2015 9:58:00 PM
Good verse , congrats on your win a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 6/6/2015 1:13:00 PM
A wowser, John. Love seeing one like this at the top of the list. CONGRATULATIONS.
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Date: 6/6/2015 9:45:00 AM
many congrats on your top spot John:-) Hauntingly beautiful lines Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/6/2015 9:44:00 AM
Powerful and deep, John. My heartfelt congratulations to your for your top of the podium win for this fine poem. Sandra
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Date: 6/6/2015 9:33:00 AM
Wow, this is stunning, John ! Deep and artistic at the same time !
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Date: 6/6/2015 9:18:00 AM
Well done, John! Congratulations on your top win. This is lovely; somehow reminds me of William Blake's "Auguries of Innocence". // paul
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Date: 6/6/2015 8:11:00 AM
Congrats on a great win John
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