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Oh, those carefree days of youth where did they go, where did they go? He sits quietly in his recliner watching the TV drone on and on... Handsome in his youth, now his body is gaunt and frail his thinning gray hair is brushed carefully over his mottled scalp. Those blue eyes, once bright and vital, now appear faded and dim under heavy glasses. A wind up clock faintly ticks by the minutes, and his eyelids get heavy. He is tired, always tired...then he dreams. Dreams of distant memories come back to him he feels so alive, living in those glory days of long ago. Now a young man, full of vigor, running along the beach swimming in the ocean, muscled, tan and strong. He then sees himself on his high school campus proudly wearing his letter man jacket for his varsity basketball team, joking around with his friends going on dates, going to dances, going to parties. A sudden noise blasting from the television jolts him awake, bringing him out of his long ago reverie. He glances down at his frail frame, and reality comes screaming down upon him again. Then a few small, salty tears trickle down from my dad's weather worn face... Oh, those carefree days of youth where did they go, where did they go? Written on 6/8/2016

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Date: 7/7/2016 2:43:00 PM
My Dada was a boxer in his youth, fought in Burma in WWII, played piano and harmonica, rode a motorbike. But I carried him in his last years, and watched him waste away. This verse was written for him. Well done, Laura. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/7/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thanks for your comments, Viv! Your dad sounds amazing! It's hard to see how my dad has declined with regards to his health, too. I cherish each time we are together. Hope you are doing well now :)
Date: 6/27/2016 7:38:00 PM
I see congrats are in order! but none the less a beautiful poem indeed!!!! :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/25/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! I appreciate your kind words:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/28/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur, for your kind words. I appreciate them :)
Date: 6/27/2016 2:16:00 PM
Laura, wonderful write a 7. I wrote one similar to this about my husband and The Seeker is right. Good luck in the contest. Thank you so very much for reading my poem “Rambling On Mincing With Words” it didn’t place but I just figured I would be funny . Hugs Eve
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/28/2016 12:24:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! I appreciate your kind words:)
Date: 6/20/2016 4:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful poem xxxx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/20/2016 5:24:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy! I appreciate your kind words:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/20/2016 5:10:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy! I appreciate your kind words:)
Date: 6/16/2016 4:05:00 PM
You have brilliantly captured that longing to recapture youth in this fine poem Laura. The comfort comes from having friends in the same boat! Congratulations on your fine win! 7 ; )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/16/2016 9:59:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Connie! I'm glad you liked the poem :)
Date: 6/13/2016 7:52:00 AM
Very powerful, Laura...I could relate to this having gone through these feelings with my own parents years ago. Beautifully written, and congratulations on our fine win in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/13/2016 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! I appreciate your kind words of support:)
Date: 6/12/2016 7:20:00 PM
Absolutely love this one,the pain and retrospection of old age expressed beautifully!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/12/2016 8:29:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I'm glad you liked my poem and I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 6/12/2016 5:32:00 PM
Wow, Laura, you really got the feeling of this contest theme across to us. I really enjoyed reading this one and it had the perfect ending tinged with sadness. Congrats to you.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/12/2016 8:28:00 PM
I'm glad you liked this poem, Andrea. I knew just what to write about, since my dad has always been a nostalgic person.
Date: 6/12/2016 4:56:00 PM
..."then a few small, salty tears trickle down from my dad's weather worn face"... and a few trickled down mine as I read this Laura. Thank you for participating in the contest. Beautifully written yet sadly poignant.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/12/2016 8:27:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement in your contest, John! I knew what to write about the moment you posted the contest, because I thought of my dad right away. He has always been a nostalgic type person. In reality, dad tries to make the most of now, although his body is weakening with age, of course. Thanks again :)
Date: 6/11/2016 9:21:00 AM
This is really beautiful I really enjoyed reading it x well done so true to life It drew me into the story x loved it xxx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/11/2016 6:06:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Wendy. I appreciate them :)
Date: 6/11/2016 8:52:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go..You did a wonderful job with this one..It is emotive and expressive..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/11/2016 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I really enjoy your poetry, as well :)
Date: 6/11/2016 8:18:00 AM
This is so moving! Well expressed, such great story telling. A 7
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:32:00 PM
Laura, I loved this. So poignant and realistic. I liked the triple 'going' sentence in the reverie stanza... so descriptive of youth. Keep writing.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/9/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thanks, John, for your kind comments! I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 6/8/2016 7:49:00 PM
A sad reflection on distant memories...very well done Laura...god bless you and your dad...^WW^
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/8/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, Winged Warrior.
Date: 6/8/2016 5:58:00 PM
I had volunteered for senior services for a few years, one gentleman never remembered who I was even though i came and everyday he would show me his photograph from when he was in the military. He was so proud of the handsome man he was. It brought tears to my eyes every day I left. Your poem does the same. hugs xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/8/2016 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Casarah for your comments. It is hard to see someone you love decline with age...this is my dad's reality right now.

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