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Somethings are best said through blank scriptures in sheer silence, but pulling the violin strings of a poet strumming to personify pain, with tempests of torment rushing through thin veins, would only widen twisted tunnels for ink to bleed in vermilion lines of broken thunder. For these lungs have long thickened from scraps of pretend promises, to dress them with mountains of flawed flowers, oblivious to the colors that suffocate, black hearted devils hovering above treetops of tainted roots. And when the angel of death descends to steal the steel within my mind, I question the vampire grey hearts that kneel, to raven midnights beating tunes of truth across glacial valleys of mourners. Why is living a gruesome terror? Where artless spirits sleepwalk along olive lawns, as grass snakes sing deceptive schemes- with the reaper that strolls through a funeral of fairies, collecting weathered wings and bleached skeletons buried six feet under the graphite soils of salvation, confined within garden graves of deception, designed In unearthly roses dipped in poison. If only the sun would rise and see, how I am no longer plagued by the vision of you destroying peace within your kingdom of hypocrisy. I am not your puppet pirouetting through hellfires ignited by the thorny knuckle of a megalomaniac— chanting manipulative mantras of a destiny, devised from disorientation. I will always sing my own stars amidst suppressed scars, until the moon trembles and falls into the heavy depths of grieving seas streaming in salty sapphires.

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Date: 10/16/2023 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest. You are an amazing poet dear
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Date: 10/15/2023 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Ink Empress! Again, virtual is just that, you're more human, warm & will find kindness. Best I've read xoxo
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Date: 10/15/2023 9:46:00 AM
Inky, wow, this is just a stunning piece! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 10/15/2023 10:32:00 AM
It truly is an honor to have poets like you that truly understands my poems. Thank you so much for placing me and always for your support
Date: 10/3/2023 3:01:00 PM
What a wordful. There's so much depth and honesty in this.
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Date: 9/30/2023 7:23:00 AM
Sigh, what a heart wrenching and evocative write this is, full of poignant emotions and heartfelt depth.. The way those megalomaniac manipulators snatch our peace only to make us dwell in graveyards of grey hearts.. Your descriptions, imageries, poetic prowess and techniques are absolutely phenomenal here.. With amazing alliteration, wordplay and metaphors.. I can deeply resonate with every line that you've squeezed out from your soul and these words impact like turbulent waves.. And that ending
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Date: 9/30/2023 7:27:00 AM
"Why is living a gruesome terror?" A haunting feeling.. "If only the sun would rise and see, how I am no longer plagued by the vision" Really phrased in a profound way and this is definitely one of my Favs from you "until the moon trembles and falls into the heavy depths of grieving seas" Wow, best of luck for the contest!!
Date: 9/30/2023 6:45:00 AM
I took It like a chapter in a book that was masterfully written. I sailed with the writer on it's sea. Recognized emotions and causes that be. This is the perfect example of good poetry.
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2023 2:05:00 AM
Oh thank you so much, i think i just bleed emotions, and when someone feels and appreciates my poems it means the world, so thank u so very much truly
Date: 9/30/2023 5:10:00 AM
I like that line, scaps of pretend promises! True! This poem is good and the last stanza also led to me making this a Fave. Thanks for sharing.:)
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Date: 10/1/2023 2:04:00 AM
Awwn this is so sweet n kind of you to leave ur uplifting thoughts and also the fave: thank u so much
Date: 9/30/2023 3:35:00 AM
You dug so deep in this piece. I love the alliteration throughout and the wonderful word weaving as well. I second Valsa and Maria's comment. How does any writer do this. It's like pouring pieces of themselves on paper daily, so impressive..
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Date: 10/1/2023 2:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for the appreciation and for your kind and generous support, truly grateful for all your support.
Date: 9/29/2023 10:11:00 PM
Wow an intensity of thought, emotions run rampant, but dont worry, the sun will always rise heralding a new day as you yourself state..If only the sun would rise and see, how I am no longer plagued by the vision of you destroying peace within your kingdom of hypocrisy. Wonderful poetry as always Inky Hugs xx
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Date: 10/1/2023 1:56:00 AM
Thank you my beautiful maria, this means alot coming from a talented soul like you, i appreciate you reading and leaving your thoughts here. Grateful for your poetic presence always
Date: 9/29/2023 7:44:00 PM
Emotive beyond anyone can fathom the depths, depicting the complexities of a mind suffering from the angst of living. However, so glad to see this poem, though lamenting on the torture of living in a world of sham and hypocrisy, ends on a note of positivity. "I will always sing my own stars amidst suppressed scars," You will no longer be plagued by any hypocritic monster....!The only resolution we can ever take to wade through the times.Wonderful penning, proving ever and ever that you are an empress in the world of poesy!
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Date: 10/1/2023 1:31:00 AM
Beautiful soul, you’ve made my day with this generous and thoughtful comment, truly such a kind soul u are, this poem is about narcissistic abuse and rising above narcissists. You are definitely a queen of poesy! And to reach your level would take me a while. I admire how effortlessly u write. Thank u again for ur sweet visit
Date: 9/29/2023 5:20:00 PM
Please don't be too sad. Here's a smiley :)
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Date: 10/1/2023 1:07:00 AM
Thank u so much for your thoughtfulness, yes . I appreciate it always
Date: 9/29/2023 12:59:00 PM
an evocative and emotional poem...so many powerful lines and words. I think at some level perhaps we're kindred spirits. I always strive to sing my own stars--I don't cater easily to manipulation or deception either. Find it distasteful on a soul level. I also like the words 'personify pain.' A masterful creation. Am faving it. Enjoy your weekend :-) Sara
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Date: 10/1/2023 12:56:00 AM
Thank you so much beautiful poetess, i always am so very grateful for your kindness
Date: 9/29/2023 12:24:00 PM
but pulling the violin strings of a poet strumming to personify pain, with tempests of torment rushing through thin veins, would only widen twisted tunnels for ink to bleed in vermilion lines of broken thunder--amazing how you portray emotions through words that adorn your thoughts. I like your highly emotive poem and the upbeat ending.
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Date: 10/1/2023 12:39:00 AM
Vijay, you are such a kind soul, i appreciate your poetic presence always. Truly grateful for all ur support as you are so very talented
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:31:00 PM
You're such a positive influence here Veej. We appreciate you
Date: 9/29/2023 12:04:00 PM
Totally agree with Anaya and said so on Suzette's blog. The world is what it is. Spiralling out of control, madness upon madness, and yet, we still own our minds and hearts. No one can steal our spirit or resolve. We will sing to the stars... together. This poem is so good
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Date: 10/1/2023 12:35:00 AM
Ah thank you so much for reading and for your kindness, truly grateful always for all your support for me and my friends, appreciate you showing us support.
Date: 9/29/2023 11:41:00 AM
"For these lungs have long thickened from scraps of pretend promises, to dress them with mountains of flawed flowers" amazing depth. Keep singing your beautiful songs, don't dispair! "I want to surround myself with people who know how to touch hearts, people who have been taught by the hard blows of life to grow with gentle touches of the soul" --Suzettes blog. Said beautifully. Your best is yet to come Ink, virtual is just that, your more human, warm & will find kindness. Best I've read xoxo
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Date: 10/1/2023 12:27:00 AM
Thank you for mentioning the blog, i did read and leave a comment, how beautiful would the world be, if we all thought the same. Thank you sweet poetess for your unwavering support always. Truly grateful
Date: 9/29/2023 11:13:00 AM
Dear Ink, This exquisite poem, crafted with hearty emotion, captures the essence of our complex society. Some verses show sorrow and awfulness, but they also depict human nature. Within this complex web, some prefer disrupting the lives of pure-hearted beings like you. Let me share this wisdom: envying brilliance is inevitable in life, in spite of the setting. Thus, it is crucial to associate with ethical and fair people. By treating others with kindness, you shall receive the same in return.
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Date: 10/1/2023 12:22:00 AM
Thank u so much Sotto, for your kind and very supportive feedback truly grateful
Date: 9/29/2023 9:46:00 AM
Love how you ended with your positive note of singing your own stars. Such vivid imagery throughout.
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2023 12:13:00 AM
Thank you so much talented poetess i appreciate ur support
Date: 9/29/2023 8:50:00 AM
I am no longer plagued by the vision of you destroying peace within your kingdom of hypocrisy..... Always important to stay away from those who play the victim when throwing stones at glass houses and in reality they become the problem.. This is a dark poem and full of angst and pain.. there will be people who do not want to make things easy for innocent hearts like yours. especially those black heart devils, many of which we see around. Many who hide behind screens acting like men but are mice
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2023 12:12:00 AM
Thank you silent one, i appreciate ur feedback always. Grateful for ur support and guidance,
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:04:00 AM
This is an excellent poem and I can see you wrote is with great emotion.. I am sorry you might be feeling this way.
Date: 9/29/2023 8:36:00 AM
Oooo.. Somethings are best said through blank scriptures in sheer silence.. yessss child!!! widen twisted tunnels for ink to bleed in vermilion lines of broken thunder.. dress them with mountains of flawed flowers, mmmm those imagery!! If only the sun would rise n see, how I am no longer plagued by the vision of you destroying peace mmmm yaaaazzzz papi!!! Omg that ending is everything!! moon trembles n falls into the heavy depths of grieving seas streaming in salty sapphires… mmm
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Date: 10/1/2023 12:12:00 AM
Awwn papi u are the best, thank you so much for reading. Always grateful
Date: 9/29/2023 8:23:00 AM
I love the line “I will always sing my own stars “ you write so well always . Love it
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2023 12:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, i sing stars alot lol appreciate ur feedback always

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