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Entangled in reality, you're trapped in depression's web. And at times, you feel overwhelmed as your emotions flow and ebb. Buried within myths and clichés, the secret of happiness lies. And the tides of hope rise each day, only to fall within your eyes. Time choreographs the setting, and a bleeding sun dies for you. And blindsided by its beauty, it's easy to believe it's true. Frustration and disappointment reduce fantasies to a tease. And your heart seeks sanctuary from a lifetime filled with unease. Wasted years and corrosive tears levy an extravagant toll. But you pursue undying love, searching every heart for a soul. You are leery of all the lies doggedly disguised as the truth. And yet, like a breeze rustling leaves; desire stirs the passions of youth. (Quatrain) 7/2/2015

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Date: 3/6/2018 8:55:00 PM
Love this stanza: "Buried somewhere in myths and clichés the secret of happiness lies. Yet the tides of hope rise each day only to fall within your eyes." And "a bleeding sun dies for you" Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/7/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/10/2015 8:38:00 AM
I think I've turned a few heads to my twitter page, and it's a Friday night. So here we go, Tweet's away...
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Date: 7/10/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Scott, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 7/4/2015 12:21:00 AM
The person you describe is undaunted...Julia, xx
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Date: 7/4/2015 8:43:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by Julia, much appreciated. Emile.
Date: 7/3/2015 6:15:00 PM
Nicely said and welcome to our corner. Thank you for your comments on my win. I am late in getting back to you because I was away on vacation for 14 days. Just home today. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/4/2015 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Joyce, your comments and support are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 7/3/2015 10:35:00 AM
A person can grow cynical from such experiences, Emile. Sounds cliche but always true - hope springs eternal. A deeply introspective write. 7. Kim
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Date: 7/3/2015 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Kim, your input is always welcome. Emile.
Date: 7/3/2015 8:21:00 AM
That second to last line is a gem. Not exactly a singular shiner, as this piece is full powerful lines, "wasted years...". Wonderful words mate, and a moving sentiment to boot. I'd like to tweet a link if you please.
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Date: 7/3/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Scott, I appreciate your support and by all means go ahead and tweet a link. Emile.
Date: 7/2/2015 2:45:00 PM
Soulfully written, Emile, and heartbreaking as well. You are exquisite with your words! It's a treat to read your poetry :)
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Date: 7/3/2015 9:53:00 AM
Laura, you brought a smile to my day, thank you. Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs