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Disguise

Disguise Deception he knows, the devils goals be hidden, drawing souls to his realm. Darkness he uses with delightful promises. Despite the masquerade, dawn brings the truth. Barbara Gorelick Pleiades contest 4/24/14

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Amy Green

Date: 5/3/2014 7:56:00 AM

Really insightful and provocative in a strange way. Enjoyed much.

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/25/2014 10:53:00 AM

if one wears their heart on their sleeves they are never in disguise...good luck in the contest, I've read a couple of these already, it will be a strong contest

Daver Austin

Date: 4/25/2014 10:38:00 AM

I like this idea. We are all part of the great masquerade.- the devil in the finding out our secret thoughts. Love, daver

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/25/2014 10:22:00 AM

Sorry, I cant edit this poem and have given up trying. Sorry about the cock-eyed format. BG