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Disentangled

moonlight nestles into every curve... afterglow _______________ 5/7/13 for Catie

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Date: 5/27/2013 10:10:00 AM

this places a lovely picture in my mind Linda

Date: 5/20/2013 8:41:00 PM

Carrie I too loved the powerful last line...congratulations

Date: 5/20/2013 3:34:00 PM

I love this too, simple but beautifully effective, and that one word in the last line says it all, congrats :)

Date: 5/20/2013 2:40:00 PM

I just loved yours, Carrie. Congrats on the list.

Date: 5/20/2013 11:14:00 AM

Congrats on your win. Well done. AO

Date: 5/20/2013 10:49:00 AM

Carrie congratulations. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Date: 5/10/2013 3:46:00 PM

A fabulous image in this Haiku. I just love reading this form. Great work. Warm Smiles, Connie

Date: 5/8/2013 10:22:00 AM

Great haiku... Best wishes in the contest~A.O

Date: 5/8/2013 10:04:00 AM

Great haiku... Best wishes in the contest~A.O

Date: 5/8/2013 9:56:00 AM

oh my goodness. You did a short one and it's so excellent. Clever lady you!

Date: 5/7/2013 8:48:00 PM

Carrie, Chef said to say Thank-YOU for your comment.He appreciates it. He will write You when he gets home. Respectfully Phillip

Date: 5/7/2013 11:49:00 AM

wow!Great ku :)

Date: 5/7/2013 11:36:00 AM

Thank you Carrie! - It's gorgeous! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)