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Mr Wise Man, show me the way I can't keep walking into walls all day Quitting jobs wasn't easy but the reasons we're wrong I felt like I was feeding King Kong Left my life to help those that need it Got mistreated, left, all to repeat it The lessons are eternal they won't ever change, That's your gift to me so that I won't be deranged. So now that I have gotten better please give me my strength My life is something that is losing it's length. Mr Wise Man, show me the way I can't keep walking into walls all day Tolerance has always been my strongest feature, Made me forget about every evil creature. Test my limits all you want, I know it's vital That is all a case of survival. I don't know why I just keep trying In the end I know I'll be dying. My faith has been put to test A test that will put me to rest All the worlds I've been to All the places I've gone through Every single man woman and child Every single one would make another mild Stronger than the rest This should make me the best Or maybe it's best I don't know Maybe it's best I just go So Mr Wise Man, don't show me the way I can't keep walking into walls all day I'll walk my own path

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Date: 6/10/2009 11:29:00 AM
Nice poetry, easy to relate, well write with good rhyming and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
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