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Discovering You

Who are you? I question myself time and again. Is it me I question or you? Where are you, in me, in heaven, everywhere I search for you, as nowhere you reside. Discovering you is taking time. Patiently I must follow. Somehow you already assure me that you are with me forever more.

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Skat A

Date: 12/31/2015 9:36:00 PM

such a good poem

Milton Toran

Date: 7/31/2013 3:15:00 PM

Well-written and brilliant! Congratulations to you!...Milt

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 11:14:00 PM

I like your poem Rainbird-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Skat A

Date: 7/12/2013 4:47:00 PM

Rainbird , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 7/12/2013 2:02:00 PM

Good one, I'm fairly new as well -so one newbie to another welcome!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2013 11:44:00 AM

- Hi, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)