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Discord Ruins Harmony

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Squabbling with words; spats in opposition can bring about discord and suspicion Christians should be able to live in harmony or their accord and union will atrophy What kind of world must humans think to mold in bringing warmth and not a chilling cold fashioning traits with kind words of diction not spawning hurtful thoughts, causing friction Antagonism unfolds to reveal hostility ruining mutual trust and tranquility With staunch optimism, I faithfully pray that no chasm of rancor will whorl my way For as long as the risen sun casts mornings in glory we will not bind our souls with fear and worry Each night a profusion of stars shine from above I pray one day we will all share brotherly love.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/30/2017 4:36:00 PM

This is amazing Lin! It is all about keeping our balance. You have written a beauty in this successful challenge! Bravo! : )

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/30/2017 6:51:00 AM

Such a great challenge wonderfully executed, Lin:) and what a meaningful poem!!

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/28/2017 11:25:00 AM

E-eezzzly done for you Lin...but I think I spotted an E...just kidding...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 8/28/2017 9:49:00 PM

It wasn't so difficult, but thank you jWW.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/27/2017 8:26:00 PM

Very nice, Lin, I enjoyed this very much ... and not an easy thing to do. Blessings!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/28/2017 9:48:00 PM

Thank you, Greg.

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/27/2017 4:57:00 PM

Very impressive, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/27/2017 6:30:00 PM

Thank you.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/27/2017 4:56:00 PM

Your soulful artistry astounds Lin...no oops ...lol........ I can't win ...Captcha 3EE...haha

Lin Lane
Date: 8/27/2017 6:30:00 PM

that's cuz you're not drinking rum. Thanks, Tim.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 8/27/2017 4:33:00 PM

Amazing!! You're probably one of the few poets on the site that could do this.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/27/2017 6:30:00 PM

Thank you, Dale.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/27/2017 4:24:00 PM

Excellent! ops, great write, ops again, fantastec, ops this isnt easy, ok ok I just loved the poem, sorry for all the "e"'s LOL

Lin Lane
Date: 8/27/2017 6:29:00 PM

Thank you, I think.

Tim Smith
Date: 8/27/2017 4:54:00 PM

Drink rum ...no oops

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/27/2017 2:09:00 PM

Hi Lin, love the content of this one. I could never have done it. Not an E in sight and you manage to hold to the content all the way through. You did fulfill the challenge Lin. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lin Lane
Date: 8/27/2017 2:14:00 PM

Thanks a whole lot for your many compliments, Mike.