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I disclaim your anger Every word I despise despite your promises my pounding your walls my wish to change you fails. Your frenzied yells bounce off my wall no longer intimidated impaired by paralysis this force within wins. I fell for you tiptoed around you sometimes you accepted or took me for granted or used me as crutch You are now imprisoned within my indifference

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/27/2018 8:44:00 AM

I enjoyed rereading this one again. The weight of your words is visceral.

James Swartz

Date: 6/3/2018 12:41:00 PM

Such moving words that most can relate to. Your ending is how the strong move on and live to find happiness again.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/28/2018 10:12:00 PM

heartbreakingly sad, Darren, but very beautiful.. I ordered your book today I am anxious to receive it.it says I should have it my May 1st. Hugs dear friend

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/27/2018 1:20:00 PM

Hello Darren,you can not change a person, to what you want them to be. The person can only change if they want to change. have a nice day my friend.

Aurore Severo

Date: 4/25/2018 11:47:00 PM

I wrap my arms around you, I read every line. xoxoxo

Darren White
Date: 4/26/2018 12:00:00 AM

Thank you Aurore, that is so nice of you :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/17/2018 7:38:00 AM

Emotionally substantive. Exceptional writing Darren.

Noel Mcleod

Date: 4/10/2018 5:21:00 PM

Oh Darren, such a heart-wrenchingly beautiful written poem. I hope you're taking good care of yourself, I look forward to reading more lovely placement of words from you soon :) Your friend, Noel

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/2/2018 11:50:00 AM

Wow! Explosively awesome DW! ...though I do hope the pain is fictitious.

Jean Murray

Date: 3/30/2018 4:18:00 PM

Not Jason surely?

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/29/2018 1:18:00 PM

Hi, stranger! Where to begin catching up? I know not, so after being shut down March-Nov and returning to find you temporarily gone, I put off figuring out how to jump back in our friendship. I HAVE MISSED YOU so much, don't let my silence fool you. Kyle, too. This poem (I will go there) could have been written by me, I've had this relationship and your last line perfectly and dramatically sums up the final feeling. You've still got it and I still want it. (my email same-lost urs) Hugs-CayCay

Darren White
Date: 3/29/2018 1:20:00 PM

i will write you back. I thought you didn't want contact anymore. Hugs for Kyle and you :)

Sara Ella

Date: 3/28/2018 8:28:00 PM

Wow! So powerful! :) I think this is a clear statement and well said! <3

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/28/2018 8:19:00 AM

Oh that's good. That last couplet, signed, sealed, delivered succinctly. Big hugs sweet P! Lovely to read you today xomo