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Disbelief

Disbelief is what ran through my mind on this day. Is this really happening? Shocking is how I felt, as tears streamed down my face Battered, were the buildings and the people rushing to help others Everyone running, crying, screaming and dying. Life ended, yet started that day. Pulling together for the good of others Incredible heros were made that day. Elated is how I felt as people were found alive, one by one. Forever sad, for those innocent people that lost their lives that day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/14/2016 1:43:00 PM
lisa austin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:11:00 PM
Lisa, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/21/2009 1:40:00 PM
Nicely done Acrostic about a terrible day for America. Keep writing. Sara
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