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Disaster In Japan

As the waves are crashing The earth is thrashing Violent winds and shakes People searching for shelter The earth is thrashing While the ground around begins to crumble People searching for shelter As radiation fills the sky While the ground around crumbles Violent winds and shakes As radiation fills the sky While the waves are crashing

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/3/2011 2:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Kayla. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2011 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Kayla

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 1:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured write this week Kayla. Love, Carol

Ellen Fahey

Date: 4/13/2011 7:03:00 PM

Such a tragedy for Japan. You did a nice job in this pantoum describing the movements of nature in this horrific event. Also heart moving for those who suffered and continue to suffer. ~ Ellen <3