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Disappointments

There is a cold and aimless fear that grips our longing and aim— like the talons of a hankered fowl, readying itself to the plunge of some inevitable sorrow… The fear becomes a burning hurt— one that is forgotten, soon to be curled up and cold— needing space and length to stretch full bodied and shamed… In the far-catching eyes of its skill, it sees no goal— only deadly possibilities and drowsing hopes. How can one write of such despair? Humans cry out endlessly in the night, forgetting that the day brings life, and all breathe a newfangled breath to conjure— to capture— hope beyond death! How can they be fathomed? these deep ends – bubbling to begin, stirring the earth with fettered shame again? Let their fears have aim toward the sky, to the One who is the epitome of joy! For in all the disappointments of this world, every fowl thing will see its end, every tear shall prove shameless, And every fear only a dream, A nightmare of weeping— waking up eagerly to a love-filled day, where all the previous cries of the night have passed away and warm, precious breath of gladness eternally replacing the gray! 10/22/2019 - 10/25/2019

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Date: 12/16/2022 7:23:00 PM
I love this, your dedication and so much thought you put into your poems is so evident, much love to you,
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/17/2022 3:25:00 AM
Much love, Stephan. Your words are very comforting to me. Means a lot to me! ~Laura
Date: 10/27/2019 7:15:00 AM
How sweet, dear Laura. Your imagery is beautiful. You took me along from sadness to joy. Thank you.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/27/2019 11:31:00 AM
It's good to see you Eileen! Glad you enjoyed. I came close to scraping it when I started it since it started out so dismal. Kinda glad i didnt now. It seems to have come together better than I thought it would. <3 ~Laura
Date: 10/27/2019 4:39:00 AM
wow... fantastic poetry.... i love the control of language in this poem.. your vocabulary and use of words is just brilliant....
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/27/2019 11:29:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by! I felt a good natural synchrony with this one. <3 ~Laura

Book: Shattered Sighs