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Disappointed

A baby on your breast,
Now being a mother,
Back then you rather 
ignored me.
As your nearest brother,
It pains me when i think 
about this child's father.
Your world in a state of 
disaster.
Not able to keep off my 
eyes glued on you,
Wondering how you got 
screwed up.
In the end they teamed 
up against you.
Your very eyes signals red 
alert.
A lot of tears have drawn 
you off juices.
Deep down i feel your 
anger.
In your own family being 
like a total stranger.
Your boy left you facing a 
scandal.
After you got pregnant,
All the hopes became 
stagnant,
Like the pyramids buried 
beneath the Egyption 
sands.

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 6:40:00 AM
    Sad. Meaningful. Understanding. I'm sorry if this really happened to your sister. If not, I'm sorry anyway for whoever this did happen to. And I'm glad it turned out good for the kid. :) xoxoxo Bryanna