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Disappearing

his presence was rather like a shadow disappearing from a wall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/9/2024 11:04:00 PM
That right there BB in so few words holds such power and meaning!! Excellent! Debx
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Date: 3/9/2024 11:58:00 AM
This makes me think of my father, always just a shadow on the edge of my life, so much conveyed with so few lines, that is the mark of a great poet~
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2024 6:56:00 PM
Hmm. 'A great poet?' I wonder: Who wrote this? Must have been you! Thanks, Michelle.
Date: 3/6/2024 8:20:00 PM
Wow…
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2024 6:59:00 PM
Many thanks for the 'Wow,' Kim. Have a wonderful weekend. ~ Gershon

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