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"dis appears" once The Great; the greatest to have ever been the best slight of hand hands down ever seen but a magician is tragic for without magic is only now known as ian

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Date: 11/26/2023 4:37:00 PM
Revelation 21:8
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/29/2023 6:07:00 AM
The sorcerers of Revelation 21:8 have nothing to do with this. I was just goofing around with words; but an interesting connection on your part James. Thanks for the thought
Date: 11/21/2023 2:27:00 AM
very smart and bright, bravo poète yann
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/21/2023 3:03:00 PM
Thanks yann
Date: 11/16/2023 4:11:00 PM
Nice Limerick today, Jeff, and I agree with what Sara shared below. She is so smart and lovely. Her husband, Bill
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/16/2023 7:05:00 PM
I believe I commented on one of your poems Bill or Sara's that I realized that you were married to each other. A wonderful union of two poets.
Date: 11/12/2023 4:26:00 AM
I love how your title fits in perfectly with your poem. Without magic, the magician is just a man like everyone else. Without our slight of hand so to speak, we humans present our own magic show every day sometimes deceiving others as to who or what we really are. This is a deep read and one I'm grateful to have found early this morning. have a pleasant Sunday, Sara
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/12/2023 4:30:00 AM
Thanks for your deep thoughts Sara. I'll have to go back and read what I wrote ;)
Date: 11/12/2023 3:31:00 AM
lol, love it. Actually, Magicians frighten me. l think its because l dont like that they deceive. l cant even bring myself to watch magic shows. Do you think they ever suffer from depression?. l wonder what makes a person want to be a magician as a profession.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/12/2023 4:09:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting Jakie, but don't you think we're all magicians to a certain extent? After all, magick with words is a wonderful deception lol

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