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Dirty Art

I’m ready for a little artwork, baby, so could you grab for me a shovel and a pail? Let’s head down to the seashore. Maybe you’ll lay your body for me on the sand? I need some sand with grains of silt and clay - a little dirty - just like “sexy you!” Such grains (when mixed with water) lock and stay! With sand like that, there’s so much I can do. I’ll blend it with some water from the sea to make a castle. YOU will be the base, I’ll thickly spread that mixture wantonly along your body – stopping at your face. . . No crashing waves will sweep away my art. My castle will have barely got a start. posted by Andrea Dietrich, 5/7/2012 Now For PD's Second Chance Contest

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Date: 11/9/2020 9:43:00 PM
Wow, way to talk really dirty, haha! I use the word 'wantonly' so rarely I had to look it up, (sad, I know) but it fit perfectly in the tone of this sexy sandcastle sonnet!
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Date: 12/11/2013 4:35:00 PM
Andrea I didn't know sandcastles could be this sexy. You painted a passionate and seductive picture for the reader Nice job Thanks for the sweet and flattering comment on my Universe poem
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest Andrea. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:53:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win..David
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:44:00 AM
ANDREA.congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD
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Date: 6/23/2012 7:16:00 PM
44 and holding.....I will send u some pics to your email and u can see the wrinkles only if u won't laff...
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Date: 5/17/2012 4:25:00 AM
Superb imagination Andrea and wonderful sketch of sand castle. You have made really a superb sexy castle, where the waves would be washing the walls to make the body more sexy and beautiful . My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra. ...Andrea Dietrich
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Date: 5/12/2012 11:47:00 AM
This is lovely, Andrea!:) That's quite an interesting castle you be making, but within these walls is what you will cherish most! Hope you'll have a great Mother's Day...you certainly deserve this! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 5/12/2012 6:40:00 AM
Andrea -- where do you get that lovely inspiration? Don't tell me. love, Kathy
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Date: 5/11/2012 4:23:00 PM
Naughty Andrea.." and then there was the drunken one...I mean't poem not person.." before I get a law-suit L O L..) quite a good write as well..
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:26:00 PM
Dirty Art indeed, A lovely story poem, nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 5/9/2012 3:56:00 PM
why am i thinking about murder.
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Date: 5/9/2012 4:02:00 PM
hahaha
Date: 5/9/2012 3:37:00 PM
Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading..Very imaginative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/9/2012 12:42:00 PM
wow,andie... this work has that naughty, sensual appeal to it... i like it.. girl, let;s get giddy, yes!!.. winning huggs!:)
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Date: 5/9/2012 3:36:00 AM
Andrea great sonnet and a great entree, I can see all the women on the beach looking for that 'special' sand ha ha.goodluck..David
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Date: 5/9/2012 2:24:00 AM
That is why I call you Sonnet Queen.Revisited this excellent write again..(you busy?)
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:48:00 PM
Hot lil' write here dear poet ! I'm gonna have ta send ya Soup mail Andrea. Awesome write ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james
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Date: 5/8/2012 3:57:00 PM
Get back to work you frisky sculptor. And build it to the sky. I think you got distracted when you got up to his eye.
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Date: 5/8/2012 2:50:00 PM
Ah yes, the fingers and the words of the true artist. I can understand that with such artistic fingers your sand castle might have been left unfinished. Howsomever, your words will be eternal. Love, daver
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Date: 5/8/2012 12:42:00 PM
Wonderfully worded, enjoyed. Wish you all the best in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/8/2012 9:05:00 AM
there is no holding you back from diversity, is there? which of course makes you all the more special. simply unique, and a sure winner for me anyway. harry
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:56:00 AM
Agreed!
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:41:00 AM
I love this original take on the contest, Andrea - sure to be a big winner. I remember trying to 'bury' my sleeping uncle on the beach once, lol.
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Date: 5/8/2012 7:34:00 AM
laying out has a whole new meaning in this poem! ha ha ha ;) good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:57:00 AM
The best to you in the contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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