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Dirty

I watch you pull at the sheets, tugging my hair and in a pattern of expectations -you always meet. Nails in my skin, digging deep. Welts building up, and sounds break our heavy silence, I knew what you wanted from what I could see. Sin clouds our pure, clean minds, I look up at your hand intertwined in mine. Hell yeah, this is it.. out of breath I gasp in air, you're loving this, pulling at my hair. To get a little dirty is never a bad thing, when you're searching to please.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 10:00:00 PM
I hate this. It's not bad, good imagery and sensory language, but I hate it. You wrote it very well! Great job =) I just hate it. You're a healer, and I hate that.
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Olivia Huddleston
Date: 7/16/2011 4:49:00 AM
Thank you(:
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Olivia Huddleston
Date: 7/15/2011 5:02:00 PM
You actually hate it? :/ And what do you mean a healer?
Date: 7/14/2011 8:08:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as u continue to share creative poetry with luv.. a true gem ...
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Olivia Huddleston
Date: 7/16/2011 4:49:00 AM
Thank you(:

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