Direction

North, South, East, or West; to which shall it be? Please tell me which way...to escape from me! * Ninth place in Brian Strand's contest, "Double Take".

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Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 6/17/2012 8:51:00 AM

I'm a lover of short poetry. I've been writing epigrammatic poetry for the last eight months (mainly haikus.) Check my first post, here, please. I sent it yesterday!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2012 9:15:00 PM

DONNA, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD

Date: 1/24/2009 8:04:00 PM

Just wanted to drop in and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest to my other comment. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 1/9/2009 8:31:00 AM

Great write, Donna. Congratulations on your well deserved Win in Brian's contest. Love, Nigel

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/5/2009 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations on a win in Brian's Double Take contest!! Well done!~ Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 1/5/2009 7:53:00 AM

Congrats Donna &thank you for supporting my contests Rgds Brian

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/5/2009 7:15:00 AM

Congratulations Donna on your win in Brian's contest! Welll done! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/5/2009 4:38:00 AM

Excellent! Very creative and boldly searching - love that! I know this poem in my heart and soul, been there, done that. love, Kristin

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/31/2008 2:14:00 PM

Wow, excellent write, Donna. I am a bit in awe of this form and haven't dared try it yet. You have done it brilliantly. Wishing you a Happy New Year and hoping that all your special dreams will come true in 2009! Love, Nigel

Date: 12/31/2008 11:55:00 AM

I think most will relate to this poem. Much said in just two lines. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 12/31/2008 8:00:00 AM

This is a qucik rhyming verse, but one that makes the reader really think. Very well written. Michael