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Dinner In Mid Air

Hummingbird so slight. Wings like fairies taking flight. Eat to your delight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/26/2010 6:13:00 PM
Special gifted words Marty so visual for the Haiku and photo in the contest... good luck..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/26/2010 12:19:00 PM
great job on the picture--
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:48:00 AM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Good luck in the contest. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:41:00 AM
This makes me smile, Marty !! Delightful poetry !! Good luck! :)
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:36:00 AM
very nice good luck in tne contest have a great day faleshia
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:09:00 AM
Lovely Haiku, love Simone
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