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Dinner in Florida

The waitress was clueless, The noise level high And two of us waited for meals, While the rest of us, hungry, Did gingerly eat, Yet still, restaurant dining appeals… For we all sat together And ate what we liked - I had fries with my sandwich and beer; When you’re visiting family, You gather around And enjoy having everyone near.

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Date: 2/13/2024 3:58:00 PM
Hi Ilene, Glad you got away from the Northern winter and had quality time with your family.
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Date: 2/5/2024 5:47:00 AM
Being with family and friends is what it is all about. Family, fries, sandwich, and beer. Sounds like a great time to me, my friend.
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Date: 2/5/2024 12:57:00 AM
I live it and i love it both, this s why poetry is made, to touch and drive the reader in your house, what a touching poem really, have a good week poet
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Date: 2/4/2024 2:49:00 PM
sounds like you made the best of it, first time I had a BLT was at a taco bell in Florida lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2024 1:52:00 PM
Nothing beats time spent with family Ilene, despite the noise and a clueless waitress. Tom
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Date: 2/4/2024 12:34:00 PM
A nostalgic and sweet poem of family, it was comforting. I hope the food was good since you had to wait so long.
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Date: 2/4/2024 11:16:00 AM
Thats what its all about being with family and the ones you love! Nice one Ilene….Debx
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