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your face, a dish with soup noodles instead wrinkles senescence, a good taste

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/9/2015 3:46:00 AM
Made me smile - personally I would classify it as a senyru rather than a haiku:-) Hugs Jan x
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Septimiu Moldovan
Date: 6/9/2015 3:50:00 AM
thanks... really is more a senyru than a haiku

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