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Dine Out 'Pon Good Food

dine out 'pon good food salad soup entre' dessert chocolate molten cake getting dressed for date all my pants shrunk at cleaners lie down to zip up Sponsor: Michael J. Falotico Contest: "What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown"

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Lee Ramage

Date: 8/30/2012 11:06:00 AM

I know we live in different areas of North America, but I think I go to the same cleaners...;-) Lee

Erich Goller

Date: 8/29/2012 8:43:00 PM

To much good food will make your pants seem to small. A lovely Senyu with an touch of humor. Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Tim B

Date: 8/28/2012 5:46:00 PM

This made me chuckle. I can definitely see the smiles and the frowns here Mrs. Sara. Thanks for sharing such a creative senryu, and best of luck in the contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/28/2012 12:55:00 PM

lol, yes, my trousers are always shrinking too. Love your sense of humour, Sara. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/28/2012 10:42:00 AM

It's a funny Senryu, enjoyed tasty pon good food. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2012 9:15:00 PM

hahaha, that last one is funny, Sara. Well, I'm done. I just went down the new poems list and saw lots more, but now it's time to finally eat!!'Goodnight!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/27/2012 7:27:00 PM

What a stupendous and awesome write my friend! You wrote an incredible poem Sara! You showed me a great smile, and a sad frown! You should do well in the contest! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/27/2012 7:04:00 PM

Good food is only good when we can burn up the calories it has without us gaining any weight. With chocolate cake, that takes an awful lot of exercising. Good double entry senryu.