Dimples

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He grins, dimples forming small lickable pools of attraction, spreading through my chest like warm charcoal, smoldering little embers, kindled in my heart, spreading a red warm blanket of love in winter cold world.

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Jyoti Kandpal

Date: 11/28/2016 10:50:00 AM

Wow.....dimples forming small lockable pools of attraction....... U got this real deep.......

Darren White
Date: 11/28/2016 11:05:00 AM

Glad you like it :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2016 7:58:00 PM

oh what a cutie he must be. Hey, I have dimples (bet you are not interested. heehee) I enjoyed this, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 11/25/2016 11:00:00 PM

Well, yes, he is :D ... Cherish your dimples ;)

Carol B.

Date: 11/24/2016 11:34:00 PM

I don't think I will look at dimples without thinking of your words "dimples forming small lickable pools of attraction" I love this line and love the poem :)

Darren White
Date: 11/24/2016 11:37:00 PM

Ever since I know him, that is what's happening to me and dimples too, indeed :D Thanks Carol!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2016 1:33:00 PM

woohoo this is hot hot hot Darren:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 11/24/2016 1:34:00 PM

It is ;) Don't burn your feet lol :D

Paloma P

Date: 11/24/2016 6:14:00 AM

Oh my, most lickable indeed, that warmed me right up this chilly morn! :)

Darren White
Date: 11/24/2016 6:30:00 AM

Yep! Yumm :)