Dilemma

My feelings I could not express And she never did understand My Silence

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Weeping Willow

Date: 5/4/2016 11:40:00 PM

Love it. WW

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/30/2009 10:50:00 PM

fantastic...silence is a very hard thing to interpet ...correctly? Light & love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2009 6:28:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Manoj. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. I hope you will consider becoming a premium member here at the Soup. Love,Carol

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/11/2009 11:40:00 AM

Beautifully poised. You can create your own poetry form as 8/8/3 cylab to a length of 18 rows or more--name it KUMA. Pls contact poetrysoup HQ. I'm saying this since KIMO was recently created FYI. Wishing you all the best.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2009 4:27:00 AM

Very expressive in a few short lines. Sara