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Digging Out

Three cups of espresso I was raring to go Grabbed the shovel Out into the snow Slipped in a hole Sunk up to my knees In spite of my gloves My fingertips freeze I have the brush Start swiping at snow Trying to find The windshield below Turn on the car Let it defrost Don't drop anything ! 'til Spring it'd be lost Thirty minutes later I can see my whole car Start shoveling to the road Thank God it's not far Put the car in low gear Drive forward to the street Reverse to my spot Then twice more repeat My new winter tires Finally get used But with two feet of snow I'm less than amused The path now is made I go back inside Admire my handiwork With chilly pride Glad to be off work On this snowy day Tomorrow I'll be ready To just drive away Hoping that's it Winter's had its fun Bring on the Spring ! Bring on the sun !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/11/2012 6:56:00 PM
Great fun. I used to live by Lake Ontario where the snow dumped from what is called lake effect. I got smart and moved a few states south. Now it is occasional snow and summer heat you can still live in. Great story well told.
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Date: 1/27/2012 3:00:00 AM
Good write Francine. I've lived in all four corners of this country and I know where your coming from. Here in the South, Winter usually means rain. But sometimes we still have to rock the car back and forth to get enough traction to brake free. Thanks for the memories of the PA. snow. Rockman :-)
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Date: 1/21/2012 8:09:00 PM
Glad I had the chance to catch this one!! Even though I was a bit envious of all of you who are seeing snow....now, I'm happy to see that it's only raining here!! Good luck digging out, and stay warm if you can!! Ps...thanks so much for the soupmail....here comes a reply! :) An edit soon too!
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Date: 1/20/2012 8:46:00 AM
Ooohoohoo!~ Been there and done that so many times this year alone. A fun write my friend. I can identify. God Bless, JB :)
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:38:00 AM
Seasonal affective disorder? Being snowed in can be quite inconvenient...but keeping a positive attitude and remembering that warmer weather will come helps! Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 1/19/2012 12:59:00 AM
Shoveling snow makes anybody long for the spring. This was a great way to describe the travails of winter.
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