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Different Tresses

Like a yarn spindle was she Pear shaped_ bottom heavy Born with honey colored hair and very fair Loved by her mother and her father's pride Life was good in their loved filled little home Soon another maiden fair Joined the family clan Just like an aunt was she with raven colored hair Blessed with hour-glass figure danity hands and feet The spindle and hour-glass Enjoyed hours of play Dreaming at times of who they would become one day_ Would they marry their knight in shining armor? Would they become a star? Surprise of surprises shortly in the future Another little doll came to the home to dwell Porcelian Doll dressed in pink with tresses of red A new toy for the sisters this delicate doll Light ivory complexion and green eyes so coy_ What would fate issue_lives of successes? Or would life destroy the sisters with different tresses? Sponsor: Jeremy Martain Contest: Objectify me

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Date: 3/11/2013 7:51:00 PM
Oh Sara almost like a book all my itself...great job
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Date: 3/11/2013 3:20:00 PM
I am enthralled by the splendor of this incredibly wondrous and amazing write my friend! This is a wonderful, like a porcelain doll type of poem Sara! You have amazed me with this piece, I thought you had done one of these poems for the contest, but I must be mistaken! What a fantastic piece, such a grand job, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/11/2013 2:52:00 PM
intriguing write, Sara - congrats on your wins too, my friend
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Date: 3/11/2013 2:31:00 PM
Oh I like this Sara, it reminds me of my two sisters, one long blond haired and dimpled I dark and scowling both a lot shorter than me, the middle one of plain description lol xx
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