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Different Strokes For Different Folks / Martha's Vineyard 2009

The fake isolation of the island insinuated the fostering of remnants; remnants of religious fervor, close knit seafaring families, and rugged farmers; remnants of power past and present. A fog shrouded canvass awaits the onslaught of August revelry. And, where widows walked the peeks of robber barons manses, the elementals now play. Tomato red fire trucks ring the seaside green. Throngs of , oh so, polite W.A.S.P.S and multicultural couples dot the lawn in precise groupings. The squeal of stroller strapped toddlers echo across ocean and down alleyways lined with painted ladies Gay blades and saucy sisters saunter unharassed through the crowds of young families. Prosperously retirees with salt and pepper hair in pink and green golf shirts line the porches of the gingerbread homes ringing the green. In the gazebo a brass band plays John Phillip Souza and closes by belting out the American anthem, after dark, no flag wave, yet random patriots stand. Their forms silhouette upon the gray fog like their intentions mocking the holiday aire with their reminder of war…. those raging on in Iraq, Iran, Afghanistan and Pakistan. and fade with the crowds roar to “Sit down your blocking the view!” And as the elite, and privileged meet and greet chatting in wonder over the multiple sightings of airforce one choppers and past President Clinton. The three times the worlds average wage is spent on FIREWORKS, frivolously, for the entertainment of the richest citizens of the planet. God Blessed America.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/25/2009 6:40:00 PM
Wow, Deborah...you are crazy good! I am kinda' new on this site and am learning so much from so many other fine poets like you. Watch out! Keep it up and you may wind up getting published (if you haven't already been!) Best regards...Tim
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Date: 8/25/2009 4:26:00 AM
Welcome home to the Soup Ms. Deborah.Great to have you back writing. I guess you left the Vineyard to soon or went there to soon. The rumor is Chelsey is getting married there this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 5:43:00 PM
Love to see it but can't afford it. I put two average Americans (my twins) through college. Any military person who wants a war doesn't belong in the military. It is neither conservative or liberal, it is the very rich taking care of their first love, themselves, that screw up this country. By the way, I've never associated patriotism with war but there are crazies out there who do. Welcome back. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2009 5:09:00 PM
Interesting topic for your poem. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:30:00 PM
interesting, good job, thanks for your comments on my poems. did you want another stanza to my poem or just a foot note on southern dialect
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:17:00 PM
A lot to think about in this detailed view of Martha's vineyard....I often think of things like this when experiencing such privileged lifestyles...either watching from the sidelines, or enjoying a bit myself. We are blessed indeed!
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