Diet Setbacks

Self-discipline whines discounting hefty losses... Demanding dessert ***For Nayda Ivette Negron Setback Contest July 10, 2016

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/13/2016 5:35:00 PM

Congrats Natalie, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 7/11/2016 5:53:00 PM

Music to the ears of this Weight Watcher member currently a little up. Over the last five years, I consistently lose the same 5-10 pounds on maintenance. An enjoyable brevity read.

Jesse Day

Date: 7/11/2016 4:58:00 PM

Felt the humor and pain - easy to relate. Congratulations on your impressive 10th place win in the Setbacks contest! Jesse

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 7/11/2016 1:05:00 PM

So real and effortless,this is a setback for many,congrats Natalie!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/11/2016 10:29:00 AM

Nice Natalie...I believe the only true Senryu I have read on the list so far.

Lu Loo

Date: 7/11/2016 10:11:00 AM

Natalie, haha love this! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Skat A

Date: 7/11/2016 10:03:00 AM

Haha, love the last line... Nat....awesome win...Skat

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 7/11/2016 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations Natalie on the placement of the Setbacks contest.

John Lawless

Date: 7/10/2016 9:08:00 PM

...and boy can those desserts be demanding.....well done